as smart as a dolphin
as adventures as a mouse
as cool as me
as crazy as a cagaro
Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
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Kia ora James, this is Kieryn from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteYou have done an amazing job creating these similes for the Summer Learning Journey teaser week!
I really liked how you used ‘as adventurous as a mouse’ as one of your similes. It makes me think of the movie ‘Stuart Little’, which is about a small mouse who joins a family and goes on lots of crazy adventures!
‘As fast as Marlin’ is not a simile I have ever heard before, but it definitely sounds super exciting. Who are you referring to when you mention Marlin? It would be awesome for you to reply to this comment and let me know.
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Hello I am Lexie from Marshland school. I love how you are so creative with your words and how you describe them Eg As fast as a mariln.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could work on you capital letters and not use the same starters. Maybe like it is, nothing is and wow this is.
I thought it was so cool you use funky words instead of boring words.
Hi, James I am Zac from marshland school, Did you know that a marlin can swim up to 68 mph! So pretty fast, I liked what you did in your learning. Maybe next time you could tell us what your learning is about a title and introduction would be really cool. Overall I liked your similies.
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